Four months ago , my friend and I
want to Boulder.We were so excited to go to Boulder.
There was a
river , this river come from the malt the ice .We saw a lot of people crossed
that river to
Other said bank . My friend were excited to cross , the water was too cold ,so
I was afraid to cross.
first my friend crossed ,I hlded my
friend hands to be with them.I n the first moment was hard .We were
careful ,because there were many Unstable rocks .When we were
crossed some of my frind arrived to other said and I was in the middle of river
,
I was challenged my self to continuous ,but
whats happen I stopped in the rock this rock moveable . I fall down the water
was cold and my clothes Drenched with water .I was craying and layhing in the
same time . After that my fiancé came and help me .It was wonderful day .
Nice Layla, I went to boulder too and I like it
ReplyDeleteHi Laila,
ReplyDeleteI think I remember this story :). Still, check your use of commas and sentence structures. Also, pay attention to your verb tenses.
me too layla, I have visited Oldorado park in boulder. It really has nice places. I like your story layla.
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